We stood fingers entwined
Drenched by falling rain
But did not notice
Thinking ourselves love's perfection
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Passion's luscious first flowering., , , , , , , , , , , I like this line, , , Great Poem 10/10
Wonderful, one of my favs from you. No words just hearts speaking.... divine
'WE STOOD' -stands tall with fine flow and reflects the real! good art!
Hey great emotions Colin. I really liked this because the two lovers in this poem did not have to speak verbally, they knew what each other was thinking. Great job...keep writing :)
In so much that i really loved 'YOUR FACE'.i have to agree that this is a perfect ten.