Friday, September 18, 2020

We Spit The Same Color Comments

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We spit the same color
If we don't take a daily shower
We naturally have almost the same odor
We walk on our two flat or fat feet
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Bernard F. Asuncion 19 September 2020

A well crafted poem. Simply noble......10++

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Quoth Theraven 18 September 2020

Very nice poem. Similarities though both may feel inferior fear. QtR

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Lyn Paul 18 September 2020

Too, you see the same sunshine and feel the same rain. It breaks my heart to see the pain that has been suffered for hundreds of years.

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M Asim Nehal 18 September 2020

Profound poem, yes we all are same it is like my poem: 5 Stars Be it of wood, be it of coal the colour of fume is same. Be it of rich, be it of poor, the smell of sweat is the same Be it of men be it of women the colour of blood is the same So on and so forth....

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