Friday, December 20, 2013

We Smile, Rise From Roots Comments

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I may take time to smile but keep it on,
Nor know what life means, nor how it bears fruit,
I know to smile from the red of young dawn.
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Edward Kofi Louis 27 July 2019

The smile of the day! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 28 July 2019

Thanks dear Edward Louis for the feedback. But there is one thing. Villanelles look easy with a lot repetitions, but are at the same time quite tricky. Do let me know, how you rate it as a Villanelle.

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Aniruddha Pathak

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