Tuesday, August 16, 2011

We Sing Comments

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Over bright fields
we fly.

Thin slips
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Steven Federle
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Preston James 18 August 2011

this poem really makes you think. you don't describe every aspect, you leave it up to speculation. it's awesome. love it.

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William Jackson 16 August 2011

? Great poem. Thought provoking. I am still contemplating the ending.

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Steven Federle

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