Thursday, September 7, 2017

We Shall Never Have Paris Comments

Rating: 5.0

There it was finally,
standing tall, such a work of excellence
Another man's work of art,
turning man into love birds that gather but in all seasons
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Tshielo Nature Otsogile
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Chinedu Dike 20 June 2018

A free flight of creativity on winged imagination. Lovely and passionate romantic poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Amogelang Motlhagodi 08 September 2017

An amazing piece of artwork

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Sandra Erickson 08 September 2017

What a beautiful poem. Ahh, but you are wrong. You will always have Paris, now. Well done.

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Tshielo Nature Otsogile 08 September 2017

haha yes, but not with her...Thank you

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Jazib Kamalvi 07 September 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Tshielo. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Tshielo Nature Otsogile

Tshielo Nature Otsogile

Francistown, Botswana
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