Saturday, November 29, 2014

We Shall Keep Moving Comments

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I know, yes I know how clearly,
how fearfully,
That i would have to leave her
one day, perhaps-willingly or
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Piyush Dey
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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 25 December 2014

We shall keep moving, You know my dearest? - loving each other. A beautifully composed poem on struggle and unity in life.Well expressed.Well done Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 December 2014

We shall keep moving, You know my dearest? - loving each other.... nice llnes....10 love and affection reach it peak with relation attachment grows love freely flows

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Lyn Paul 01 December 2014

Your heart has penned these words. Beautifully expressed Piyush.

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Valsa George 30 November 2014

Very passionate longing! The hope that oneday your paths would converge keeps you moving, though now you tread through different tracks! Let trhings happen as you wish! Enjoyed this poem of love!

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