Saturday, July 13, 2019

We Shall Be One Someday Comments

Rating: 5.0

We shall be one someday,
If I stop in time waiting for you,
But I'm growing,
And you shall advance slowly,
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deepanshi sabnani
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Jazib Kamalvi 19 July 2019

Very impressive write, Deepanshi. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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C F 13 July 2019

Simple yet an extremely sad poem, a sad encounter and just experience: Jesting that we could have stayed. Very touching.10+

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 13 July 2019

When men stop advancing, well you have the beauty of poetry did not realise you were a poetess lady Kindly do read my poetry 1421 read me today MOMS SMILES TO BEGIN WITH D S U MAY

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