Yes, it was raining
When I first met you
I saw umpteen desires
Dancing in your eyes
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Beautiful poem....love is Devine until it is free from self centeredness and ego....loved it....thank you for sharing :)
Beautiful sensitive and sensual poem, very nicely penned transporting the readers into the love land. My compliments for this romantic poem.10+++
Wow..wow. That's an enchanting poem. You really are at your best when you write on love. Full of sensual imagery, this poem is really intoxicating.10 of course.
Love is very powerful! Not even the rain can stop it. Nice work.
I am with Kelly Asim.. Only you and Akhtar sahab can write such brillaint verses on love.. Thank you for sharing.
Lovely poem. Meeting at rainy night and not feeling anything exepct love. This is sweet concep. I liked it.
You are among the few, alongside my friend Akhtar, that can write wonderful love poems
The rain of love descendeth from above, but becomes dry being earthly and sensual..........Nehalji.......this is very well expressed........thanks for sharing.........10+++++