We'Re Strong Enough Comments

This is an enjoyable read. (2 typographical errors, line 3 and line 12) The lines Let love be thrown out. But love will crawl back in. might be simplified Let love be thrown out. It will crawl back in. beyond that you might see if any words can be intensified or possibly calmed down. thrown out might be cast out or cast down(implying like a demon) crawl back in, are you sure love crawls or does it come back like the wind or the tide Let the jealous survive. do you want them to arrive or to thrive. either way it should not rhyme with the line above it. It rhymes nowhere else. It is distracting. I think this poem could be strengthened I give it 8 out of 10

Howsoever strong the devil and its evil forces may be, love is going to be the ultimate winner. I love this message, I love this poem. Thanks.