Friday, February 28, 2020

We're Half-Now, Half-Forever Comments

Rating: 3.5

Ice ribbons around icebergs: a calendar to date it with
and star-tipped
and snow-capped
and split clouds of cumulonimbus
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Eli Spivakovsky
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Khairul Ahsan 13 March 2020

The fifth stanza is the best of all: 'The ocean grows and spills over And my heart is big enough for it all when I am with you your eyes like flakes of diamond flint your eyes the colour of hummingbirds with their luster and their dazzle consort me' - so nicely said!

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Anil Kumar Panda 09 March 2020

A great write indeed. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing. 'We're half now, half forever we're here for now, but will become classic in time'.. is so good. Loved it.10+++

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Gajanan Mishra 28 February 2020

Carving up the floor, good write

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