We pay a visit
To pray and not to greet
With our need to be considered as fit
Silently look at and offer candle to lit
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Preeti Sabhar.. There is Holy Spirit in mind To shower mercy and be kind
nice Thewordking Hljohnson4 minutes ago good words
Randall Hodges2 minutes ago This poem takes you into a deeper meaning, the underlying words give you a hint at a deeper meaning. It was thought provoking, made you think. Comment +1 seems there is a duality of message
Cristina Plimpton2 minutes ago I think you are reflecting two entirely differing sets of thought here...and outside of the last sentence I really liked it. What did you infer when you said when he smells foul? Are you saying he smells nasty or he actually smells something bad in the air? Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago something bad happening around. that is
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