Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Thursday, September 5, 2013

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We pay a visit
To pray and not to greet
With our need to be considered as fit
Silently look at and offer candle to lit
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 September 2013

Lima Yngz Buchem and Ramesh Rai like this.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 September 2013

v.ramachandran thank you excellant

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 September 2013

jyotiram sahoo We very well know we r powerless

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 September 2013

Preeti Sabhar.. There is Holy Spirit in mind To shower mercy and be kind

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 September 2013

DEVKISHAN MEH.. Nice

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 September 2013

Beautiful C Pacheco5 minutes ago Great job!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 September 2013

nice Thewordking Hljohnson4 minutes ago good words

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 September 2013

Randall Hodges2 minutes ago This poem takes you into a deeper meaning, the underlying words give you a hint at a deeper meaning. It was thought provoking, made you think. Comment +1 seems there is a duality of message

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 September 2013

Cristina Plimpton2 minutes ago I think you are reflecting two entirely differing sets of thought here...and outside of the last sentence I really liked it. What did you infer when you said when he smells foul? Are you saying he smells nasty or he actually smells something bad in the air? Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago something bad happening around. that is

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 September 2013

We pay a visit To pray and not to greet

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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