Saturday, August 6, 2016

We Orbit Each Other Comments

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In my orbit where I dwell I sometimes cross your path
Your satellites of humor, good will and joyfulness
Sing within my sphere in harmonic electric wonder
Listen to the music of one or countless others
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Edmund Strolis
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Theodora Onken 15 August 2016

Heart touching...and so on point. We have all had our good and not so good, perhaps some way more than others but if we didn't have one another- -shoulders for comfort - what a hopeless situation it would be. Another core touching write.

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Edmund Strolis 18 August 2016

Yes and isn't this theme found in your writings? I can't imagine that if you recognize this truth it must be well worded in one form or another in your many poems. I never tire of the many ways in which we can recognize our good fortunes.

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Nosheen Irfan 14 August 2016

Love, understanding, family affection are the saviors of mankind. From these positive feelings we derive our hope n strength to face the odds of life. Lovely piece of writing.

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Edmund Strolis 18 August 2016

Yes Nosheen there are those that wish us happiness and appreciate our differences and our desires. I have no doubt that you have so many wonderful people that are glad to know you!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 August 2016

We have seen good fortune turn on a dime. Of course you are very right in your expression here. Good will and joyfulness sing within our sphere in harmonic electric wonder. Very, very amazing sharing! ...10

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Edmund Strolis 18 August 2016

The essence of this writing is integral in your philosophy.

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Kelly Kurt 06 August 2016

Orbits sometimes cross, and either give or take momentum. Thanks, Edmund

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Edmund Strolis 06 August 2016

I do not believe that the world is worse than it ever once. That the present is somehow worse than Vikings at the shore or the plague at the door. Nonetheless the heartache is inevitable. We all have our weight to bear.Yet sharing the burden and taking some of the burden is the best we can do as we choose to face oblivion as victims of our mortality or as a band of defiant pirates, cursing fate together.

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