Thursday, October 10, 2013

We Need To Change Comments

Rating: 5.0

The wind is shaking the window
breeze smoothly through my skin
i look at the sky
and the star was twinkling beautifully
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luciana isabelle
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Mohammad Khosravi 05 October 2018

very beautiful. You put words together very beautiful. like pro

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Utsav Patel 08 November 2013

Wow! What a nice piece. Just loved it... you know when I was reading it, I constantly comparing myself to those lines. And those lines were.so true... Kudos luciana. :)

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Khairul Ahsan 17 October 2013

''WE ARE WHAT WE ARE'' thus, the only one that can possibly change us is us... ' This is an absolute truth!

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Abhishek Mishra 13 October 2013

Lovely poem..you bring a real colour into it: -) .a 10/10 I must rate it: -)

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Gajanan Mishra 10 October 2013

seeing others achieved, good write, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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