The wind is shaking the window
breeze smoothly through my skin
i look at the sky
and the star was twinkling beautifully
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Wow! What a nice piece. Just loved it... you know when I was reading it, I constantly comparing myself to those lines. And those lines were.so true... Kudos luciana. :)
''WE ARE WHAT WE ARE'' thus, the only one that can possibly change us is us... ' This is an absolute truth!
Lovely poem..you bring a real colour into it: -) .a 10/10 I must rate it: -)
seeing others achieved, good write, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.
very beautiful. You put words together very beautiful. like pro