Tuesday, September 24, 2019

We Need A Toy Comments

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Slowly I get up, slowly I sit,
Slowly I run to my old man
No sound, the zero power bulb I unlit,
As slowly as I can,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 24 September 2019

such simplicity and so much beauty you are not old enough yet SIR JAWAD I am about 80 and you know it life edges d epends on one's mind but yes I am not now LIKE @16 But my mind is still green

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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 September 2019

An excellent composition sir! I sincerely appreciate the undertone...........................10

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