We Need A Gap Poem by Naga Vamshidhar Ratakonda

We Need A Gap

Rating: 5.0


Lot of Gaps developed,
And Distance too with that,
Gaps that cannot be filled,
Distance that cannot be measured;

I had too much of You,
And You had too much of Me;
Vexed up us both are,
With Each Other,
With too little space between us;

The space wasn't enough,
To Breathe or feel 'One Self';
The distance so close,
Can't look each other in Eyes;
It was always 'Us' both,
Like Milk & Water mixed;
Never 'My Word' or 'Yours',
Far too much of a compromise,
We both had together;

We need little Gap,
We need a bit of Distance;
A Gap that can be filled,
With our 'Breaths';
A Distance from where,
We both can hear and,
Truly feel our 'Heart Beats';

We need a Gap & a Distance,
From where we both,
Can see & love each other,
Being 'One Self' each,
As ‘Two' different People!

Sunday, February 4, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: affection,heart,heart love,life,like,love,love and dreams,love and life,lovers,marriage
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The Poem 'We Need a Gap' - is my Valentine offering to couples and lovers.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 04 February 2018

Naga, such a good write...10++++

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success