Sunday, January 22, 2006

We Must Teach Peace Comments

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When Life no longer has a meaning,
When I cannot aspire to what HE’s made,
When I do not look in awe at this World,
I know I must end this tirade.
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Jonathan Goldman a.k.a JGthepoet
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***** ********* 22 January 2006

I agree with the sentiment of your poem wholeheartedly Johnathon, the problem is, the should word, if we replaced it with 'could' humanity would not feel pushed, so to speak. Forgiveness of other and more so, ourselves, is much harder said than done, but if we practice. It becomes easier! Just like all things in life. 10 from smiling at you, Tai

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