Wednesday, January 8, 2025

We Must Ensure All Share The Open Sky... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Today the kites took flight in skies so vast,
like dreams they floated, vibrant colors bright,
a childhood sport that links me to my past,
their tails a dance of wonder and delight.
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M. Asim Nehal
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D.N. Rebb 09 January 2025

This poem reminds me of the book, The Kiterunner. Though the novel has a dark undertone (as your poem appears as well) , the moments when the kids fly (and yes, turn it into a battle game) are written (and seen in the movie) with such beauty (as your poem also expresses, M. Asim)

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David Wood 09 January 2025

An excellent poem that sums up the world today

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 08 January 2025

Bravo Asim Thanx for this brilliant poem

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Rebecca Navarre 08 January 2025

Filled with such heart and deeply found wisdom! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 08 January 2025

Beautifully expressed and ever so heart moving! .. Thank you! .. Thank you for sharing this! ..

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Rebecca Navarre 08 January 2025

Ohhh, How deeply heart touching! .. And I'm so sorry to hear of such an experience! .. Yes we must keep skies safe! ...

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M. Asim Nehal

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