Wednesday, April 30, 2008

We Loved From A Distance Comments

Rating: 4.3

I sat just observing in a remote area
watching your hair blow in the wind
Watching your brown eyes
squint and sparkle in the sun
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Waqas Naeem 30 April 2008

exquisite...you have wonderfully portrayed the torment in a lover's heart and his desire to achieve true love...keep writing

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