Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Monday, May 13, 2013

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I said “yes”
She said “no” on face
We were always at disagreement
Point of no compromise at given point
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Chantelle Cox44 minutes ago keep it up v Kristin Ell42 minutes ago This poem tells of abuse on both sides, yet you seem to flourish from it, so I won't judge you. The poem, however, is good. Full of love and understanding. The last two lines don't quite fit the poem, though. They seem out of place. Comment +1 I like it

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GOOD Nick Adegwe-Oshomah35 minutes ago Nice effort Comment +1 A bit confusing just Arun Great rythme and a nice cadence marks this piece uniqu

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I said “yes” She said “no” on face

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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