Sunday, February 26, 2017

We'll Create Our Own Comments

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They chase out
And try to pull us apart
They may scream and shout
And bid us depart
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Samuel Segun Toluwalase
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Darwin Henry Beuning 11 December 2017

Samuel, enjoyed reviewing your poem this morning. Suggest you change one word, change perfect to imperfect. We live in an imperfect world, but, if one finds true love, that is all that matters. I rate your poem a 10.

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