Monday, October 12, 2009

We Live In The World We Build Comments

Rating: 5.0

You can choose from the crops of unhappiness…
or you can unearth the joy from your heart.

You can choose to draw from your dark stormy life…
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Almedia Knight-Oliver
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Ken E Hall 26 July 2010

Excellent way to portray the way we build our world, very thoughtful choice of words with love mixed in thankyou for sharing this with us +++10 regards

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Choice lies with you…’Free Will’…Very wise poem… Full of sparkling diamonds …contemplative diction But all goods and bads are but relative…good to some bad to others…but we’ve to equate it how much or up to what extent and depth? …on material [non living] or non-material [living] later is injurious and not advisable and deplorable… Ma’am excuse me ‘There is nothing absolutely good as absolutely bad’ in one thing... 10+. Ms. Nivedita UK PS Apropos tile of the poem which world 'mainly'...inner milieu or outer one... n

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Claude H Oliver Ii 27 November 2009

A more responsible view of creation.

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 15 October 2009

very true mam...everything starts from us..our choice to make or break...you put it forth very well

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Shashendra Amalshan 14 October 2009

Yeah.., .... we build our own world... But lets get together and build it with the bricks of love, not with the weapons of mass destruction.. this is nice loves and hugs shan

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Ismael Iniguez Carvajal 12 October 2009

Very Nice, I would agree, life is what you make it

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