We Live Forever Comments

You are a prolific poet, Reshma. I am so proud to be your friend as well.

Commendable work, young lady...Resplendent image work...tastefully sensual....mellifluous structural movement....Keep that pen pumpin'! ~ F j R ~ __2008__

Romantic and sexy poem indeed! Bravo Reshma!

A woman's tender words of warmth. So soothing to a man. These are the enchantments only a woman can bring to intimate moments. Expressed and presented as well as can be done. Recommended reading. A fine talent for using words. Skilled wordsmith. My respect to you. GW62

'of the your love' - 'of love yours' - would be better there...good romantic write...beautifully expressive...Ten for you Reshma...

I was in a spell, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , ,10++

indeed you will, with such passionate poetry, we are enery wihich becomes one with the cosmos 10

Take me thou by storm When my tears flow on thy cheek Love is like a rose in bloom From street to street is spreading The story of our acquaintance Written have thou my name on thy bosom With blood I write thy name on my heart Never to forget thee in the world hereafter Hold thy hand for my lips to kiss The divinity of the being bathed in love Hold thy glance for my heart in raptures In silence I tread with the eloquence of the one Conqueror of the world is he who hath Put the sword in front of thy love For I forget wars and anguish of multitude When thou hath cast that cruel glance on me