Sunday, March 4, 2012

We Live Carefree With Two Bond Slaves Comments

Rating: ★3.5

We live carefree,
With two bond slaves,
Only Life and Death.
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Neela Nath Das
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Danny Draper 13 March 2012

Be bold in this life and then if an afterlife it will be taken care of by faith. A nice write and good structure.

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Thomas Fontenot 06 March 2012

This one doesnt have much flow

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Richard McClellan 05 March 2012

Good job. Nice Flow, a little more rhyming would be nice in this poem...

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Felix Lama 04 March 2012

nice written. life and death are exactly bond slaves

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Neela Nath Das

Neela Nath Das

India
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Neela Nath Das
India
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