Monday, May 21, 2007

We Learned How To Fly Comments

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On cinder blocks it sat our nest.
A cozy three room flat of bricks.
My sister and I would laugh and cry,
As our parents did their best...
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Marci Made 21 May 2007

This poem shows the value of 'family' without all the frills of things not needed. It shows a person who has his values and his life in order and has the right perspectives..... good one Lawrence........marci. :)

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Derrick Clark 21 May 2007

good work my friend, you need to start publishing.

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Alexandra Niculai 21 May 2007

A very wise thought! I really enjoyed this beautiful poem.

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

Lawrence S. Pertillar

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