When love turns to salt
Minds are defeated
When eyes begin to cry
Hearts get broken
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When I read this poem I think some personal loss inspired to write this good poem...since salt comes out and the pain can be expressed....... a master work in simple words............
i'm really touched by your words&how they r sad so sad, u know i, i learned from it sth. so, congratulations.
LEARN! that's the sense of life... even when all seems lose the sense.... great poem.
Your poem contains a universal truth, but it's not clear to me only tear gives a proper learning.From my point of view sorrow can not prevail long and so we want to get rid of it.You know on the way of our life journey we lost a lot of near and dear ones, but like a new morning a new one comes and occupy the lost one-it's the rule of nature.your poem remembers me Thomas Hardy's pessimistic attitude.
i really enjoyed reading this.. no matter what the tragedy, there is always a lesson to be learned. great write
Music Head is right what we learn and the amount we learn is up to us... this is a great poem... very nice job. ~MC~
thanks for suggesting this one.. i like it because you didnt use a bunch of big words for no reason. you didnt need big words. good job. i disagree with sherif. it ends perfectly. what we learn is up to us.
Very nice poem. But it isn't clear! After tears, we learn it is not clear what we learn? it is nice rythemic poem. I wish if u could have another two lines.
hello i really like your poem i can relate to that has i have been there a couple of times myself i give it a 10 :)
We learn troughout our lives but still die as fools... This is a great poem. Short & straight to the point. Sometimes you only need a few words to express your feelings.10 from me