I'm not here
To instill fear
Or to indoctrinate
With my beliefs
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Nick, I would not use two cliches to anchor your poem. The central message of the poem discounts the role of our unique minds. Each one has its own chemical-electrical synaptic pulsations. It does everything for us together with the automatic functiong of the brain, all of life. Learning every millisecond we move along through our lives.
Thanks for your comment Robert, similarly I wouldn't spell function with a g on the end of it.; 0)
A refined poetic imagination, Nick Jordan. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.