Monday, April 16, 2018

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I'm not here
To instill fear
Or to indoctrinate
With my beliefs
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Nick Jordan.
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Jazib Kamalvi 03 July 2019

A refined poetic imagination, Nick Jordan. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Robert Murray Smith 16 April 2018

Nick, I would not use two cliches to anchor your poem. The central message of the poem discounts the role of our unique minds. Each one has its own chemical-electrical synaptic pulsations. It does everything for us together with the automatic functiong of the brain, all of life. Learning every millisecond we move along through our lives.

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Nick Jordan 01 November 2018

Thanks for your comment Robert, similarly I wouldn't spell function with a g on the end of it.; 0)

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