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right from the first word the optisim in you is so very evident and it is an eyeopener for the gen-next to 'just halt' from their 'romantic inertia' and look into their 'inner shrine' -the shrine of true love where lord resides. artistic display of phrases! thanks for sharing satya.

Exceptionally brilliant first stanza....I went thru my own views...thru your words...10++ - Brishti

I wish, you are able to meet your beloved. But what a confidence! amazing...10

nice poem..your confidence.and positive insights brings hope, faith and inspiration to anybody who are far from each other...this is actually happening in our lives...you have related it finely and truly..10 for you..

These are my sentiments exactly! I just sent this treasure to my long distance best friend. This hope is REAL! !

I guess i can relate to your poem.. It seems that i was reading some passed page of my life :) thanks for sharing.. ric Dhodi

THAT'S SO FULL OF HOPE AND UNSCATHED BEAUTY... :)

full of rage and full of hope too...raging hope?

like you read my mind...........beautiful

This has a haunting wistful quality, combined with passion and sensual longing. The volcano image and the idea of looking inwards past the jangling tinnitus of everyday life to glimpse the shadowy contour of the loved one, are particularly strong. The context is unclear - this clould be a poem written to a lover who has gone to work abroad, to a partially estranged partner ('On that day we shall meet' being the day that she looks on you with love again) or even a relationship that the writer hopes to find in the future. I like the relatively simple words that you have used, as well.

a good love song on optimistic lines...must say well composed...my ten

OH this is soo beautifully penned and with soo much drama, true love does not stop any and all it encounters, if only in the end to pick up where once left behind........Bonnie