We had a body
we had a mind
we had a choice
we had our chance
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They will put right what we did wrong ......so touching with nice theme. Beautiful poem.
Our time has passed, time to make way for the next ones. But when was our time over? Great poem!
A thought provoking poem, how often we misuse our resources and then repent. Great write,10+
Dave, such an inspiring poem..............................
Having chance of positive perspective in life is great. Having a mind of beautiful choice is definitely favorable for life. An excellent poem is well penned.10
Well drafted, loved it, But, dear poet, automatically nothing will come, for well being everything we have to try, ....
Now we are but A vessel upon this earth Carrying the souls The ultimate truth has been revealed in simple yet most authentic manner. Great write. Thanks for sharing.10++
Maybe we still have chance as long as we are alive and healthy, if I do not misread you! Heheheh!