Sunday, October 28, 2018

We Had Our Chance Comments

Rating: 3.9

We had a body
we had a mind
we had a choice
we had our chance
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Dave Alan Walker
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Solomon Senxer 09 November 2018

Maybe we still have chance as long as we are alive and healthy, if I do not misread you! Heheheh!

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Dipti Deori Borah 06 November 2018

Beautiful poem with nice feeling

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 October 2018

They will put right what we did wrong ......so touching with nice theme. Beautiful poem.

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Kostas Lagos 29 October 2018

Our time has passed, time to make way for the next ones. But when was our time over? Great poem!

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M Asim Nehal 29 October 2018

A thought provoking poem, how often we misuse our resources and then repent. Great write,10+

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Bernard F. Asuncion 29 October 2018

Dave, such an inspiring poem..............................

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 October 2018

Having chance of positive perspective in life is great. Having a mind of beautiful choice is definitely favorable for life. An excellent poem is well penned.10

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Muzahidul Reza 28 October 2018

Well drafted, loved it, But, dear poet, automatically nothing will come, for well being everything we have to try, ....

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Ratnakar Mandlik 28 October 2018

Now we are but A vessel upon this earth Carrying the souls The ultimate truth has been revealed in simple yet most authentic manner. Great write. Thanks for sharing.10++

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