Friday, January 2, 2015

We Grew Apart Comments

Rating: 4.5

We became good friends
I actually don't remember when
But the moment we met
I thought I knew what lay ahead
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utsav kadmawala
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 January 2015

We became good friends I actually don't remember when But the moment we met.. good lines...10 It was good try On your part to fly With sentiments I have few comments It can be one sided feeling That had inkling You expressed in your way She had her choice and way As friend She promised as friend till end You could pick her message “There lies still good time with age”

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Chinedu Dike 11 January 2015

Love is a spiritual experience that affects all and sundry profoundly, it's effects linger long even after the source of stimulation is gone. Love is whimsical and temperamental, it comes when it pleases and leaves without warning, enjoy it while it is there and do not waste time worrying about its departure, worry won't bring it back. A well articulated poem written from the heart. A nice piece indeed. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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