Monday, March 12, 2012

We Flew In The Clouds Comments

Rating: 5.0

We flew round the clouds, we really flew,
We circled the clouds, like we owned them;
We pawned some hours, left lying around-
Soon as we could unground them.
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Patti Masterman
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Wahab Abdul 14 March 2012

AN EXCELLENT POEM, NICE TO READ AS WELL AS VERY THOUGHT PROVOKING.

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Smoky Hoss 13 March 2012

This really is such a pretty picture!

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Annabel Cruz 12 March 2012

Great rhythm and rhyme scheme.....nicely done Patti!

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