Saturday, September 19, 2009

*we Fit Together Comments

Rating: 5.0

The wall is cold against my back
Your body warms me.
We fit together, you and I,
Like a cup and saucer.
...
Read full text

Lillian Susan Thomas
COMMENTS
george george 06 October 2009

Lillian, this is just the poem I did NOT want to read tonight! I'm up all alone, can't sleep! Haha! Oh well, it is truly a beautiful piece. Nicely felt, nicely done.

1 0 Reply
Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 19 September 2009

This piece has mellifluous movement, and your employment of metaphoric tease enables you to deliver tasteful sensuality...Solid craftsmanship, young lady... F j R

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success