We Die Before We Die Comments

Highly philosophical

very nicely done! i think this poem is written very well... and i like it a lot! ! =) keep writing and ill keep reading :)

Well you can say that too ' we die before we die ' when no ones elses could help you when you need it and when you loose someones so precious in your life.Nice writes Austyne.

I love the conclusion to your poem, 'We die before we die.' 'Though this may already be understood it comes across as profound and insightful. Nicely done...