We Could Of. - The Boy Part Comments

God bless your talent!

party girl is sitting next to me, , , she said its cool! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! so if you find the time check her out......Poet 'party Girl' she is foxy.... Peace

easy flowing poem, from a simple heart.written well, keep it up.

I have read over many of your poems today, steven, and I enjoy your simplicity of structure. This poem is my favourite. Good use of contrast with a sincere and loving tone. Thanks for sharing.

The Girl Part; Part One (= i Lay on My Bed And Wonder Why, Whats The Reason For My Cry, is It a Plead? To Make me Stop And Think Before i Bleed. or is It Cause i think of All the Words You Said, The ones i Wish Weren't in My Head. otherwise it Just Might Be That Soon You'll Stop Loving Me... Now; i Don't Want To Loose You, i Just Want Your Words To be True So Make Me Believe They Are; & Maybe We Can Go Far. Thankyou So Much (=

keep on doing this you're really good on making second parts

The construction of the sentences is so well and the words used could have convinced any girl you used to love.Good job bro!