Tuesday, May 5, 2015

We Care For You.... Comments

Rating: 4.5

I can feel the pain in your grin
I can sense the vacuum created within,
The anxiety that arouses in you
The distress you are going thru.
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Kavya .
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Valsa George 26 September 2015

This is a fantastic write Kavya..... the typical behaviour pattern of an elderly helpless man who feels neglected! His erratic behaviour can annoy anyone. Still he needs to be made convinced that he is not alone, but there are others around him to care! Top marks!

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Rohit Pawar 05 May 2015

Marvellous. Daughters are the best!

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Kavya . 06 May 2015

Thnx for that wonderful comment Rohit.

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