We Can Look Comments

Re: We can look (Score: 1) by darylg44 on Saturday, January 04,2014 (20: 42: 05) An important topic. You captured it well in your poem

Another good poem Hasmukh! about a minute ago · Unlike · 1

welcome rohano daudi a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

Just about ok in expressing a missionary message! Adams Bodomo23 minutes ago The sincerity to throw out a message of do-good for children is surely there. The poetry could be sharpened: shortened stanzas and condensed verses would do the poet good in the next edition of the poem!

well expresed poem on youth and future Joshua Mayfield4 minutes ago If anything I would suggest making one stanza but overall solid poem.

Ashraful Musaddeq likes this. Ashraful Musaddeq If children come up with good care a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

Lovely children You are like bright sun