Saturday, January 7, 2012

We Can Be Raindrops Comments

Rating: 3.5

I saw your face on a raindrop
And we can be brothers
And we'll breath the same air
And we can be sisters
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Margaret Beil
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Neil Bryan Tabanao 24 July 2012

it's so nice margaret

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Wahab Abdul 20 January 2012

the last two lines of the poem is very significant....the protagonist of the poem...wants to express..love cares and sympathy..for the humanity......which enhance the quality of the poem...and that attracted me...nice poem indeed....and please read my poems

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Kee Thampi 10 January 2012

the air of love that can be breath for peace on Earth and we'll breath the same air And we can be sisters And we'll fly inside out With the speed of a rainbow's flight

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Ebi Robert 09 January 2012

I have always being talking about my love for nature. This poem is one that has spoken for me today.

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 08 January 2012

A very beautiful imagery.We are to make the rainbow in life.

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Vipins Puthooran 08 January 2012

we are all incessantly outpouring raindrops from a canopy of sky! ! ! ! ! It's an excellent poem! ! ! top marks! !

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Margaret Beil

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