Tuesday, November 4, 2014

We Can Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dear children, can you read?
Yes,
We can read and write,
And catch the time tight.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Aniruddha Pathak 23 August 2019

Lovely, the poet is talking to children, and the dialogue that ensues has to be in the language as spoken by children, and this is wonderfully done here.

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Mahtab Bangalee 31 October 2018

yes we can everything if we have conscience we win anything of this life and after life if we have power without conscience we win only this life ...... //beautifully written

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Zwelethu Siwaphiwe Shweni 27 August 2016

We can speak the truth And can bright our youth We can spare, can do well, In good manner we can dwell. We love all and kind to all, Away from violence we do pall. We are souls all are brothers, We can win heart of others - I really loved these lines, may all the children be like these! Thanks Kumarmani. My 10 for this amazing poem, from best poet.

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Charity Nduhiu 05 October 2015

Here we learn the honesty of children. Well thought I like

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Edward Kofi Louis 11 November 2014

Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

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Saheb Mohapatra 07 November 2014

great poem.........children stating about them in a poignant language...........thanks.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 06 November 2014

Really you are the loving soul - a best teacher as mother - a nice message and a nice guidance parents may read and act accordingly and thank to poet and PH

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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