The dust settles and past has been locked
Roads are empty where you once walked
The veiled songs of when you were young
Never seem to be back on your tongue.
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There is a different aura in the writing here..... should I say that you are maturing with time.... like the cellar wine! You have touched some chords here and feelings melt.... I love to read you!
Thats a sad haunting poem Preeti, speaking of a forlorn hurt...great imagery... well I have also begun writing after a long break...had many guests from India... great to read you again... love Arti
Preeti...I think this is one of your best poems. Great going tho its been a looong time. Love...TO
An enjoyable write; we must always remember that our past does not have to be a defining factor of our future; nicely done.
well preets, you c the rhymes do the magic...feels great to read it.. eeeeexcellent work..and a great title keep up......arshaj