Saturday, January 12, 2013

We Both Could Hear Comments

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I trim the fat
And you ate the meat
But you still  can't  understand 
One word I speak
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Brian Kilpatrick
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Titi Dale 12 January 2013

Wow this is such a great poem! You sound to have a lot of understanding in how to express your feelings without going on and on and ON. Simply a great write! Tiegan

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