Tuesday, January 22, 2013

We Birdies Chirp In Nest Comments

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We birdies chirp in nest
In Hope of springing soft.
Feathers and feeding sweet
Mom to perch in its nest.
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Narayanan Nair. P Perunthanam
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Valsa George 15 June 2014

'The Moon a zero- bulb In waters crested club'. Love these lines! Great write!

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Shraddha The Poetess 23 April 2013

sir.., it was wonderful, i really enjoyed reading it. i am a new poetess so pls keep reading my poems and give comments.thanks... shraddha

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Patricia Grantham 18 February 2013

A nice poem, keep penning. Thanks

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Dave Walker 01 February 2013

A fantastic poem, a wonderful write.

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Barbara Nixon 28 January 2013

Excellent poem, wonderful structure and beautifully written. Inspired write!

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Chandra Thiagarajan 24 January 2013

The Birdie's chirp in the nest has produced a wonderful rhyming poem from your pen. Enjoyable totally.!

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