Saturday, December 13, 2014

We Begin Only To End Comments

Rating: 5.0

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The moment we arrived on earth
Coming out of a mother's womb
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Amitava Sur
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Roseann Shawiak 12 April 2015

Such a stark realization we do all reach at some point in our lives, Amitava. Knowing that death is to be our fate in the future, is a sad and eerie thought to be thinking while we are living. Still, we are only mere mortals doing our best to survive in this temporary world. Doing random acts of kindness to others while living. A great poem, Amitava! ! Thank you for sharing, RoseAnn

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Tushar Ray 20 December 2014

Very thoughtful, well-written poem on the mortality of human being, which very few acknowledge while alive. In this context, there is a story in Mahabharata where Judhisthira (who never lied in life) said in response to a question regarding the strangest thing in this world in his personal experience: While living people see others dyeing, and hear about many people's death, yet never believe themselves though that they will die someday. Congratulation Amitava!

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Hazel Durham 17 December 2014

So true and beautifully expressed in such a creative way!

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* Sunprincess * 17 December 2014

............very nice....like our days....every season becomes more special, when it's realized they are limited....

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 14 December 2014

The very truth spelt out here with amazing words and rhyme......wonderful poetry.....10/10

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Akhtar Jawad 13 December 2014

an amazing and powerful poem................10

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Savita Tyagi 13 December 2014

Wonderfull thought provoking poem. Loved the metaphor of hour glass. Life is an amazing mystery. We all know it ends yet it is the last thing any body wants to think. Greater is love of life in us all than its end. Enjoyed the read. after so many days site is working good again!

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 13 December 2014

A nice poem and think sand of time how fantastically arranged..sand descends down upside down - finish is death the concluding - Our mortal life is a dynamic process Which begins only to end. thank you

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Valsa George 13 December 2014

Our mortal life is a dynamic process Which begins only to end. Great realization Amitava! The poem is powerful enough to establish the transcience of life! The message to do maximum good to make this life worthwhile rings loud! This deserves top marks!

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 13 December 2014

our mortal life begins only to end. a.thought provoking poem

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