Thursday, January 17, 2019

We Arrived Finally Only To Die Comments

Rating: 3.3

Death and birth
are verse and obverse
of the same coin
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Srijita Mondal 20 January 2019

'We arrived finally only to die' The moment we are born we are on the track of Death.. A very good thought is expressed in your poem

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Prabir Gayen 20 January 2019

Good night good day some one may see you beyond eternity no one can that say an earthly SPIRITUALIST ONLY MAY... Beautiful lines....o great poet you are a plato with Aristotlian mind....

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Akhtar Jawad 18 January 2019

Neither we are born according to our wish nor we die so. We are helpless.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 18 January 2019

Sir so true are you I am also now marking time may be any day could be or ALLAH may delay it what has to be will be we all only have to wait and see in this vast ocean and smaller seas let us swim but silently

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Binayakumar Mohanty 18 January 2019

Someone may see you beyond eternity.Is there one dear? After all we are hopeful.Excellent one.Thanks for your creative adventure.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 18 January 2019

thanx BM guys like you INDEPENDENT MINDED LIKE ME I ADMIRE O POET G

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Valsa George 17 January 2019

Yes, we are born either as the result of planning or its absence. But we die without any planning! Death comes uninvited and at an unplanned moment! We are only travellers here, sometimes a guest and sometimes a host and never a ghost! Enjoyed this poem of deep philosophical broodings on life and death! A sure 10

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 17 January 2019

Thankx a great deal Vlasa G for your deeper analysis

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