Monday, March 2, 2020

We Are Women Comments

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Looked over at my sister and what did I see?
Someone fly
Someone strong
Looking back at me.
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Deidre Dixon
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Bri Edwards 02 March 2020

p.s. perhaps shades of: " Oh yes, I am wise But it's wisdom born of pain Yes, I've paid the price But look how much I gained If I have to, I can face anything I am strong" From the Helen Reddy song, I Am Woman (1971) :) bri

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Bri Edwards 02 March 2020

2 - What's wrong with speculating, and, at times, dismissing (with cause i mean) ? I (a man) have no " dreams" or " passions" . But maybe ALL WOMEN do? Though i differ in some of my opions, i like the poem. bri :)

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Bri Edwards 02 March 2020

1 – fly: [adjective] very good, excellent; " cool " ? " She was an elder" i think " elderly" :) " like women sometimes tend to do" you meant to say THIS? How about men; don't they also " pre-judge" etc.?

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Chinedu Dike 02 March 2020

A beautiful tribute to womanhood ceremoniously rich in tone. A fine and lofty verse. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched, Deidre.

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