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Glorious write...

nice to me meet some good poet same as Paul here on this brilliant poetry site

this masterpiece is very strong and well penned, the imagery and idea is very unique and poetic, deep with many devices linked to the universe and world, but in the end that is what we call the human world in the Paul's point of view.. It deserves 10+ and it goes on my fav list well done

sorry you are so underwhelmed, the poet crashes from pedestal to earth so a simple matter, we impact then smash, shall we rise again?

a million splinters of marble gleaming white, shattered into mica shards splitting the light causing rainbows to refract our thoughts we are but spectres at Michael Angelo's feast.