Tuesday, March 23, 2010

We Are We Comments

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Well you are you and I am me
And we are free, my friend
Well I am here and you are here
The time is near, my friend
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James Frady 25 April 2010

I like the way it bounces along with rhyme and rhythm, and it pulls you from one line to the next

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Anna Mode 23 March 2010

I really love the play on words in your poem. It gives it a very memorable rhythm. Great work.

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