Saturday, February 10, 2007

We Are Sand Comments

Rating: 5.0

Water washes,
Repeatedly over stones,
Gently turning them to sand;
Specks upon this land
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Lynn Grassette
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Alison Cassidy 11 March 2007

I often feel as if my life is sand in cupped hands... Yes, a fine metaphor for surrender and release. You write very well Linley. love, Allie xxxx

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*Mandy * 11 February 2007

I love your way of writing. Great Job! ♥ Mandy

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Not a member No 4 11 February 2007

Hard hitting insights. That sand is precious. This fine work displays your ability to think symbolically Lin - and you're ability to write good poetry as well as songs. You're on your way! jim

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Tranquil Ocean 10 February 2007

Echo your sentiments exactly. Have a very similar poem~ Sands Of Time~ Love..TO

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