Thursday, December 22, 2016

We Are Retired Comments

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Mike has become somewhat lazy and heavyset,
Bill takes another puff off his vapor cigarette
As for going to work, they no longer fret.
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Randy McClave
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Sister Frances 22 December 2016

What a brilliant piece of poetry, there was so mant stories within a story. My dad is Bob, my uncle is Tony...I think you've covered all the facets of retirement and yes the last line just rings true, I'm holding up a big 10 for this one :)

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Randy Mcclave 22 December 2016

Thank you for reading my poem and your comments. And thank you with your big 10 :) Randy

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