We Are Now Humans (Inspired By The Good With The Bad By Soha Zaki) Comments

Very thought provoking words, Akhtar. If our bad qualities attract the good, then each one of us can be redeemed. Terrific verse.

Life is a game of give and take and so it is UNDOUBTEDLY coming from Akhtar Jawad Janabh thee what if your name had been AKHSAR! ! ! ! (OFTEN) more than often

A poem full of an original way of seeing the inner workings of building human relationships. Gives the reader much to ponder. And I am amazed how poetic you made this philosophic discussion- that should have been difficult but you gave this an easy flow with similarities and contrasts and superior word choices.

A great poem that presents the intricacies of being a human being. Liked the closure lines.10

Same poles repel and besame poles attract is true. Life is a game of give and take is true. But we can't give and take something each other often. We are each other's friends, just to smile and say proudly, we are now humans! An outstanding poem.10

A thoughtful poem, with a lovely universal message.

If only laws of nature could influence laws of men. Negatives repel. Vacuums are filled. Smile buddy.

Attraction of good and bad, makes the human relationships stronger.Great write