Sunday, August 24, 2014

We Are Nothing But Jokers Comments

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Our justices and leaders,
Are our reflections,
If the people are just,
Justices are honest.
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Akhtar Jawad
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bri edwards 12 March 2019

(cont.) 2 - i often avoid making controversial statements in my poems by making them fantasy or at least not terribly 'serious'. i'm not a 'very serious' person. bri :)

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bri edwards 12 March 2019

1 - i suppose there is some truth to your 'truth'; i really don't know. but, in any case, your poem is very well written. i don't think many, if any, 'nation' is uniformly made up of people with the same thoughts, desires, needs, beliefs, or emotions. and in a democracy this mixture makes for a mixture of leaders, which can be a very good thing.' bri :) (cont.)

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Khalida Bano Ali 19 March 2017

A thought provoking poem...........................................

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Ramesh Rai 27 August 2014

I agree with you. you must have seen the movie MERA NAAM JOKER. Thanks for sharing. Regards.

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Amitava Sur 25 August 2014

Very true it is, if the norms and forms are maintained rightly by the rulers and those who are ruled then surely it is a peaceful haven to live in. But the biggest question today is... is it followed rightly by either of the 2 parties? ? ? Thanks for sharing.

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Tadasha Tripathy 24 August 2014

May be a bitter truth.The description for goodness of this poem is above my knowledge and standard.Thanks.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 24 August 2014

The poem put finger towards the burning heart and mind... lost transparency..differentiation among rich and poor, black and white, caste and religion, powerful and simple, what we want unity justice for all...Its our inner demand leaders must be good, As the subject so the king and the trend lost as the king so the subject Ah! we are democrat...... nice poem sir jee

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Sd Tiwari 24 August 2014

You have drawn a true picture here.

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Sd Tiwari 24 August 2014

You have drawn a true picture here.

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