Gajanan Mishra

Gajanan Mishra

Tikapali, Patnagarh, Balangir, Odisha, India now at Tapobana, Titilagarh, Odisha, India
Gajanan Mishra
Tikapali, Patnagarh, Balangir, Odisha, India now at Tapobana, Titilagarh, Odisha, India
Monday, December 23, 2013

We Are Not Being Attracted Comments

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We are not being attracted
Society has been degraded
From truth all are separated
Being misguided and this
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Gajanan Mishra
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Cassandra Jasmine 23 December 2013

Such a short poem. Not that I don't like it, but at least you could use some punctuation to straighten out the kinks in this verse. Also, misguided by who/whom? I think that the poem might be better off if there were more details. However, if you like it just the way it is, keep it. These are just suggestions.

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Gajanan Mishra

Gajanan Mishra

Tikapali, Patnagarh, Balangir, Odisha, India now at Tapobana, Titilagarh, Odisha, India
Gajanan Mishra
Tikapali, Patnagarh, Balangir, Odisha, India now at Tapobana, Titilagarh, Odisha, India
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