Such a short poem. Not that I don't like it, but at least you could use some punctuation to straighten out the kinks in this verse.
Also, misguided by who/whom? I think that the poem might be better off if there were more details. However, if you like it just the way it is, keep it.
These are just suggestions.
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Such a short poem. Not that I don't like it, but at least you could use some punctuation to straighten out the kinks in this verse. Also, misguided by who/whom? I think that the poem might be better off if there were more details. However, if you like it just the way it is, keep it. These are just suggestions.